{"id":2109,"date":"2010-07-12T16:23:23","date_gmt":"2010-07-12T23:23:23","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/?p=2109"},"modified":"2010-07-12T16:23:23","modified_gmt":"2010-07-12T23:23:23","slug":"belloc-on-contrived-clever-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/2010\/07\/12\/belloc-on-contrived-clever-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"Belloc on contrived clever writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I can&#8217;t say I have found a ton that I like about Belloc, but one thing I DO appreciate his his down-to-earth attitude and love of the common man. Here, he rails on people that refuse to use simple words and language in their effort to sound clever or sophisticated. Yes, a rich education and a deep vocabulary is good, but don&#8217;t use a ten-dollar sentence when a cliche that everyone knows will actually do just as well. You may earn a point in an essay writing class, but you won&#8217;t really be helping anyone.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>You are as full of Pride as a minor Devil. You would avoid the <em>clich\u00e9<\/em> and the commonplace, and the <em>phrase toute faite.<\/em> Why? Not  because you naturally write odd prose&#8211;contrariwise, left to yourself  you write pure journalese; but simply because you are swelled and puffed  up with a desire to pose. You want what the Martha Brown school calls  &#8216;distinction&#8217; in prose. My little friend, I know how it is done, and I  find it contemptible. People write their articles at full speed, putting  down their unstudied and valueless conclusions in English as pale as a  film of dirty wax&#8211;sometimes even they dictate to a typewriter. Then  they sit over it with a blue pencil and carefully transpose the split  infinitives, and write alternative adjectives, and take words away out  of their natural place in the sentence and generally put the Queen&#8217;s  English&#8211;yes, the Queen&#8217;s English&#8211;on the rack. And who is a penny the  better for it?<\/p>\n<p>-Hilaire Belloc, The Path to Rome, p.162<\/p><\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I can&#8217;t say I have found a ton that I like about Belloc, but one thing I DO appreciate his his down-to-earth attitude and love of the common man. Here, he rails on people that refuse to use simple words and language in their effort to sound clever or sophisticated. Yes, a rich education and &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/2010\/07\/12\/belloc-on-contrived-clever-writing\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Belloc on contrived clever writing&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-2109","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2109","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2109"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2109\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2112,"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2109\/revisions\/2112"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2109"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2109"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/moscowcoffeereview.com\/carpecakem\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2109"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}